tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post7481011379820450486..comments2024-03-26T06:47:57.605-04:00Comments on Get Lost in a Story: Angi Morgan's LatestJacqui Nelsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12793508141294935459noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-84542277147527154272013-04-30T15:51:55.202-04:002013-04-30T15:51:55.202-04:00Thanks for all the comments during the Protecting ...Thanks for all the comments during the Protecting Their Child blogs. I assigned everyone a number from the 25th through 29th and Random.org chose CHEY & GIRLYGIRL as the winners of the Giftcards.<br /><br />You gals send me an email with how and where you'd like your $10 credit (or an address to mail it to you): Angi@AngiMorgan.comAngi Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568009648101184027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-24662341135782465682013-04-26T13:40:06.931-04:002013-04-26T13:40:06.931-04:00This is the copy editor's version:
As he left...This is the copy editor's version: <br />As he left the courtroom a free man, Jorje Serna pointed directly at Cord McCrea. "Your wife is a dead woman."<br /><br />It might be the grammatically correct way to communicate, but definitely has no punch (imho). I was glad that my EDITOR agreed with me and kept the original version: <br />“Your wife is a dead woman.” Jorje Serna, as he left the courtroom a free man, pointed directly at Cord McCrea.<br /><br />~Angi<br />Angi Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568009648101184027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-11890534120672018262013-04-26T13:35:16.749-04:002013-04-26T13:35:16.749-04:00Thanks Donnell !!
I loved this review.
~AngiThanks Donnell !!<br />I loved this review.<br />~AngiAngi Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568009648101184027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-72268657060479558302013-04-26T09:59:39.985-04:002013-04-26T09:59:39.985-04:00Morgan tightens the coil until it springs forward ...Morgan tightens the coil until it springs forward in an explosive finale." What a review, Angi. You go girl. Love the excerpt and can't wait to see the trailer!Donnell Ann Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07943037206984648849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-58730008396440316782013-04-26T01:02:57.418-04:002013-04-26T01:02:57.418-04:00Hi Laura... I changed the edit back to the origina...Hi Laura... I changed the edit back to the original (this is the original). The entire book grew off that line and I just couldn't part with it. hehehe <br /><br />Nope...the copy editor changed it to something with no punch at all.<br />~AngiAngi Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568009648101184027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-8539378529086773912013-04-25T19:02:32.981-04:002013-04-25T19:02:32.981-04:00I love the first line. Was it originally a threat ...I love the first line. Was it originally a threat against him instead of the wife??Laura AKA Loves 2 Read Romancenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-25446398296353057912013-04-25T13:28:46.552-04:002013-04-25T13:28:46.552-04:00GOOD GUESS BN, but nope. It was a bit more drastic...GOOD GUESS BN, but nope. It was a bit more drastic than that. :-)<br /><br />~AngiAngi Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568009648101184027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-78229025985715708102013-04-25T13:28:08.578-04:002013-04-25T13:28:08.578-04:00Thanks Clover?
Care to guess how he changed it?
~...Thanks Clover?<br /><br />Care to guess how he changed it?<br />~AngiAngi Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568009648101184027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-68129836750452070822013-04-25T13:16:31.891-04:002013-04-25T13:16:31.891-04:00Nice opening line. Was the change the removal of t...Nice opening line. Was the change the removal of the words "a" and "woman"?bn100noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-50833268795173759632013-04-25T11:53:07.688-04:002013-04-25T11:53:07.688-04:00That's a great first line, really starts with ...That's a great first line, really starts with an impact. Clover Autreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12627410482268422941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-29713817637025109912013-04-25T11:25:26.060-04:002013-04-25T11:25:26.060-04:00Thanks Gal !!
~AngiThanks Gal !!<br />~AngiAngi Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568009648101184027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-29959390489072780762013-04-25T10:46:18.305-04:002013-04-25T10:46:18.305-04:00Congrats on your new releases, Angie! ;) JillianCongrats on your new releases, Angie! ;) JillianG. Jillian Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09606257875353431854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-54867201448758116962013-04-25T10:37:59.630-04:002013-04-25T10:37:59.630-04:00Good morning Lara !!
I'll let a few more peopl...Good morning Lara !!<br />I'll let a few more people comment (fingers crossed) before I share. Wanna take a guess?<br />~AngiAngi Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568009648101184027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417651694294092310.post-88772432669506882412013-04-25T01:32:04.590-04:002013-04-25T01:32:04.590-04:00It's a great opening line! How did they want ...It's a great opening line! How did they want to change it? Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00700737187405826842noreply@blogger.com