Thomas and Pru. Cheyenne Dog Soldier and half-black
Southerner. He has lived a hard, violent life. She’s an educated lady. Both are
caught between two races, each seeking a place in the challenging world of
westward expansion and post-Civil War turbulence. Their only common ground is the spark between
them that doesn’t die. But is it enough to overcome the vast differences
between them and give them the strength to forge a new life together?
Here's an excerpt:
“We’ll
get on the first train headed west and—”
“No,
Prudence. We will not speak of that now.” Thomas walked to the bureau. He did
not want to hear grand plans or listen to more promises. He did not want talk
at all. Hoping to avoid it, he poured water into the bowl for washing then
shrugged out of his coat. He saw her face reflected in the mirror above the
bureau and knew by her expression that the harshness of his tone had hurt her.
But how could he tell her he did not want to talk because he was afraid of what
she might say? If she made promises tonight, then changed her mind and got on
the train tomorrow, that would be the end of it. And he was not ready for that.
In
silence, he pulled his shirt over his head. He felt her watching as he splashed
cold water on his face and neck and chest then wiped it away with his shirt.
One more night.
That was all he wanted. If there were to be no more tomorrows for them, he
wanted at least this one last night with her. But his pride would not let him
say that, or admit his weakness for this woman who had walked away from him so
many times.
Weary
from his long ride, he stood at the bureau, head drooping, his hands braced on
the wooden top. He watched water drip from his hair and felt the silence press
around him. Oh, Prudence. How had it come to this?
He heard her rise from the bed.
Lifting his gaze, he watched in the mirror as she came up behind him and slid
her arms around his waist. Her touch sent a shiver through him, and he closed
his eyes so she would not see the need in his eyes.
“Thomas...”
He
felt the warm smoothness of her cheek against his back, the soft press of
breasts against his damp skin. A hot trail of silent tears rolled down his
spine, and his own eyes stung. “Will
you ever forgive me, Thomas?”
The
ice around his heart cracked. Resolve shattered at his feet. With a groan, he
turned and pulled her into his arms. He couldn’t stop shaking. Couldn’t stop
the burning behind his eyes.
“Heme’oone,
sweetheart,” he whispered in a rough voice. “I will always forgive you. But
tonight, we will not speak of the troubles between us.” He leaned down to kiss
the tear tracks from her cheeks. “The time for words is past.”
In
between her years as a mother, teacher, commercial artist, reluctant collection
agent and surly secretary, Kaki fooled around with writing. Finally, after
twenty-five years of procrastination, she sent her first manuscript out into
world. It won the 2011 RWA RITA Award for Best First Book, and she was off and running.
Now she has eight books in print, one digital novella, an anthology and has
just finished book 9, which ends the Heartbreak Creek series. She and her
husband are happily retired on a mountaintop in the Cascade Mountains of
Washington state, doing whatever they feel like doing—which in her case is
writing and enjoying the wildlife, gardening, and thinking up stuff for her
husband to do. It’s a grand life.
Please visit Kaki at https://www.facebook.com/kakiwarner
or write to her at kaki@kakiwarner.com.
She loves hearing from readers. All of her books are available in print or
digital at major book retailers and on-line distributors, as well as the
Penguin/Berkley website. Check out Kaki's author page on Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/Kaki-Warner/e/B002M91GRI
E.E.: What has surprised you the most about
being published?
KAKI: That nothing has really changed. After twenty-five
years dabbling with the same story, endless rewrites, and tweaks, I was
convinced that first book was a story worth telling and I’d done the best job I
could of doing that. So a month after I sent it out and I got an offer from
Berkley/Penguin, I was delighted, of course, but not totally surprised that it
had sold. Sound cocky? Why not? I’m a reasonably intelligent person. I’d spent
over two decades honing my craft. I had done my research and listened to my
critics and learned my characters inside and out. That’s what any committed
writer should do. But not every committed writer meets with success. I knew I
was very lucky that my manuscript had fallen on the right desk at the right
time and the editor who read it was in a receptive mood. So there were no
earth-changing changes to being published, other than to find myself suddenly
very busy, churning out a book every six months, and getting sucked into
promotional BS that I have no aptitude for. But sometimes at night, a thought
comes that jars me fully awake, and I realize that I actually did it—I actually
got published by the biggest paperback publisher in the world and they keep
asking for more. That’s huge. Especially for a granny who went on Medicare the
same year her first book came out. Nothing beats validation, no matter how late
it comes.
E.E.: What would you say is your most
interesting quirk?
KAKI: I don’t cry. Oh, I
can summon a tear or five every year or so, but I’m just not a crier. It’s
quirky because most romance writers I know are very emotional people, which
really enhances their work. Not me. So I have a dear friend, and world-class
cry baby, who keeps me on track with the boo-hoo stuff. But I make up for that
failing with a really wicked sense of humor. Oddly, I think it’s the humor in
my books that helps them stand out from all the other well-written books in my
genre. Life can be pretty ridiculous, and people are always struggling to get
it right. Which can create some funny, awkward, tender moments in between
rolling around in the hay and shooting bad guys. At least, I think so.
E.E.: Do you read reviews of your books? If so,
do you pay any attention to them, or let them influence your writing?
KAKI: Yes and
not much. Many reviewers can impart excellent information about what worked or
didn’t work. Of course, that’s only one opinion. But if it forms a consensus, I
definitely take note. Personal reader preferences, I discard—some reviewers
want more sex, less about children, less violence, etc. But if they say I
treated a subject unfairly, or harped on one theme too much, or used offensive
terms, I listen. Doesn’t mean I’ll change anything, but I’ll be more aware of
it from then on. A few reviews have made my day, but none have ruined it. My
readers have mostly been very kind and I really appreciate that.
E.E.: Is writing or story-telling easier for
you?
KAKI: Writing and editing is easier. Plotting has always been more difficult
for me. And I LOVE developing characters. I also try to put in other elements
in my books—historical events, natural events (avalanche, flood, fire, etc.),
and a very strong sense of setting. Between all that and the characters (who
can be pretty pushy at times) the plot often gets shoved to the back burner. I
really have to watch that, especially since I’m a “pantser” and don’t write
from a disciplined outline. So far, it’s worked, but it’s getting harder and
harder to keep all those elements corralled.
E.E.: What sound or noise do you love?
KAKI: No way
can I narrow that down to one. Owls hooting, coyote serenades, distant train
whistles, birdsong (especially meadowlarks), babies laughing, string music, the
sound of my husband breathing beside me at night.
E.E.: What turns you off like nothing else?
KAKI: When I
find myself using adverbs to create emotion. (“…she said, achingly.”) It never
works. Just weakens the whole thing. Or when I overwrite, by telling the reader
exactly what the character thinks after every word is exchanged. This is
especially true in dialogue. If you interrupt every spoken line with a
paragraph of introspection, it really slows the scene. Think of Ocean’s Eleven. Brad Pitt and Clooney
are in a bar. Pitt is watching some sports thing on a TV when Clooney comes in.
Throughout the entire conversation they never make eye contact and Pitt never
speaks (I hope I’m getting this mostly right). Anyway Clooney starts watching TV
and says, “We might need more men.” No response. “Yeah, I should probably get
more men.” No response. “You think we need more.” No response. “Okay. I’ll go
get more men.” Then he leaves. Look at all the information you get in that one
short scene. It’s a lesson I have to re-acquaint myself with all too often.
E.E.: You've been nominated for a RITA Award for Where the Horses Run. Are you picking out a dress for the ceremony?
KAKI: No, I’m not picking out dresses for the Rita Awards Ceremony. Sadly, I won’t be attending, but will be at home, nursing my new knee and listening to the results on Twitter.
E.E.: Where did Thomas and Pru come from?
KAKI: Actually, they began as secondary characters—Thomas to provide a foil for Declan Brodie, and Pru, to help round out the characterization of her sister, Edwina. From the first, they seemed to have taken on lives of their own, and insisted on being in all of the other books, as well. Over the years, I have received queries and requests from readers to give T & P their own book, but it wasn’t until I had finished WHERE THE HORSES RUN (in which Thomas plays a major role) that I decided to give it a go. So much of their story had already been told in the other books, I was afraid I wouldn’t have enough left to write about. But as is often the way, a new character showed up who provided the perfect spark to get them going and add a new layer and depth to their relationship.
E.E.: How do you feel about the series ending?
KAKI: Both sad and glad. I love all these characters, but I needed to let them go so I could move on. I tried for closure in the epilog, but hope I didn’t go too far by putting it 65 years into the future. I wanted to let readers know how everything ended up and show that the town continued on even though the principal players are no longer there. Some readers will prefer to have the characters live on in their imaginations. If so, I hope they will avoid the epilog. It won’t change Thomas and Pru’s story either way.
Today, Kaki will give away two autographed copies of HOME BY MORNING. Just leave a comment and enter the raffle below.
Have you ever found characters in a book so compelling you couldn't forget them and had to know how their story ended? Which ones and why?
Welcome back Kaki! I am so honored to be hosting you on the day you release your last (cue tears) book in the Heartbreak Creek series. No spoilers here, but I can guarantee your readers won't be disappointed. Well, not in the book. We're very sad to say goodbye to Heartbreak Creek. All these characters feel like friends.
ReplyDeleteI'm so delighted to be here, Elisabeth. This is such a fun blog and you have such diverse readers. I'm looking forward to chatting with them.
DeleteThank you for the chance. You are a new author for me. I can't wait to read these books.
ReplyDeleteThen I wish you good luck winning a copy. Thanks for coming by, Lola.
DeleteThanks for the chance to win!
ReplyDeleteThen good luck, JoAnn. Glad you came by.
DeleteThat looks like an outstanding read. This is a new author for me. You have such wonderful interviews.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree I always hate for a series to end that I love but I always to look forward to what the author has in store for me in the future.
Cyn, it was hard for me to end this one, too. But sometimes you have to close a door and start something new. I hope you get a chance to read the Heartbreak Creek books--they're a lot of fun, and I can guarantee you some laughs and some tears. Thanks for coming by.
DeleteKaki, your story seems fascinating to read!
ReplyDeleteIt was sure a hard--but fun--one to write, Nicole. These are such complex characters, I wasn't sure I could do them justice. If you get a chance to read it, let me know if I accomplished that.
DeleteNot fair, Kaki, for you not to cry but once a year. I must have received your share of tears as I cry at everything. Looking forward to reading your books.
ReplyDeleteLilsis, it's a failing, I know. But I actually did shed a few tears with Thomas and Pru's story. Especially toward the end. Thanks for coming by.
DeleteCongratulations, Kaki! I can't wait to find out what you'll do next. (How about a story of Mrs. Throckmorton!) I'll be digging into this book since I'm off today and I woke up to it on my phone. Like a little present. That I thoughtfully bought for myself. I can only say to your new readers, good luck with your sleep loss. You can't put these books down. (Great interview!)
ReplyDeleteChristina, you say the nicest things. Hope you like T & P's story. It was difficult to write but I think I got it. Let me know. And have a great summer!
DeleteWelcome back to GLIAS, Kaki !!
ReplyDeleteI just saw my high school friend KreKre and thought about your unusual names.
Hi, Angi, delighted to be here. As for unusual names, I think KreKre wins.
DeleteHi Kaki! Loved your interview. From the first book of the Runaway Brides- Heartbreak Creek I knew Prudence and Thomas had to have their own story. That was just a given. To me, there was a lot left unresolved from as far back as when the Indians took her. She refused to speak about it to anyone. I'm so relieved that they can finally be together and resolve all those old issues and hurts. You just have a way of telling a story that burrows into my heart. Your characters are all unforgettable. I read Pieces of Sky so long ago but I still remember Brady Wilkins stopping that stagecoach and getting on because his blistered feet wouldn't let him walk any further. And he carried his saddle. Such a great, great story. When I read that one I told myself, "I want to write like her." Although I've tried, I fall short. But I'm not giving up! Nope.
ReplyDeleteI'll be in NY yelling for you that you win the RITA for Where the Horses Run. You'll probably here me all the way to Washington.
Best of luck my friend. Wishing you tons of success!
Linda, you and Elisabeth are the most generous supporters of your fellow authors. I don't know how you find the time, but I greatly appreciate it. I wish I could be there with you at Nationals, and thanks for your support, but I have some really stiff competetion...especially from Jodi, the queen of the genre and another gracious lady. Give her hugs from me and have a great time.
DeleteHi, Kaki! and welcome to GLIAS! I had to giggle over your name as my nickname when I was a tot was Kikki. Congratulations on your book.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Vicki! This is a fun group and I always enjoy visiting.
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