Adding Local Flavor to a Story
You might have seen this last week on Just Romantic Suspense.
I've added more pictures.
I love to work local landmarks into my books. I’ve had several
fans say they learn something about the Texas city where the story takes place
each time they read. Dallas’ Pioneer Plaza is one of my favorite places to take
friends and family. I’ve been several times and end up taking photographs each
time because I always see more details. One of my favorites is pointed out in
the video: the horsefly.
In DANGEROUS MEMORIES I
needed a location that could be slightly public but also add a bit of
excitement to a chase scene. On the other side of the Cattle Drive Sculpture is
one of thee oldest graveyards in Dallas County. And on the same acreage is the
Dallas Convention Center. What better place to add a life and death chase. I
actually have my husband to thank for this location. At the time, he’d done a
lot of work at the convention center and knew how to get in and out of the
underground parking facility.
Below is the chase scene through the statues and gravestones. Levi
and Jolene are running from men who had abducted her. You’ll see a reference to
Rainbow Man–it’s Jo’s dangerous
memory from childhood that’s put her in peril. If you haven’t read Dangerous
Memories…I hope you’ll give it a try.
Excerpt from Dangerous Memories:
"Where
are the cops? Or your friendly FBI? Didn't they want to tag along for the fun?"
she asked, untying the sleeves of her shirt, rolling it and making a bandage of
sorts under his pants leg. "This looks bad."
"Bad
and I wouldn't be able to walk. I'm fine. You're in a chipper mood. You
forgetting that you almost died back there?"
"I
remember. But once you arrived, I didn't think about dying. By the way, you're
getting slow," she whispered with a grin and yanked harder on the sleeves.
The jolt of
agony blasted through his entire body.
A bullet
pinged off a bronze longhorn. He turned back and discharged his weapon to keep
the shooter pinned behind an oak tree.
"Jo."
He grabbed her shoulder with his free hand, forcing her to look at him. "You're
going to run up that hill, get across the street and call Lanning. He should be
close."
"Does
Lanning have the GPS info?"
"Yeah."
He handed
her his cell, whispering as firmly as he could without being overheard. "Just
like in the garage. You lead the way. I'll be close behind."
She
understood and nodded her head.
"I'll
lay down cover and you run." One step backward and his hand dropped. He
took a couple of shots and she took off. She didn't let the gunfire slow her
down.
Another
shot hit a tree trunk just behind him, coming a little too close. He laid down
cover fire and got to his feet to follow.
"Watch
out for the horn," Jo cautioned.
He faced
forward just in time to miss taking a two-foot longhorn across his neck. She
waited long enough to see him miss it, then darted between the statues and the
rock ledge up the path.
He had less
and less feeling in his foot and it was harder to move. They'd made it across
the cattle drive sculpture and into a cemetery at the top of the slope. A
frickin' cemetery in front of him and an empty convention center to his right, closed
businesses across to his left, and the driver of the van on the road behind
him.
"Which
way?" she asked. "Can you make it to the road?"
"No
good, we don't know where the driver is."
"Then
we go through the cemetery. We keep moving until George finds us. That's what
you said, right?"
He doubted
it. But he waved her onward. He had no intention of following the entire
distance. He couldn't. The footsteps slogging up the hill were closer. The guy
chasing was certain to see them with the multicolored neon lights from the Omni
illuminating the place like the Vegas strip.
She darted
to the next tombstone, then a tree, her silhouette as plain as if a spotlight
shone upon her path.
It was
imperative to stop the guy following them before he caught up with Jo. He
searched the darkness. Waited for movement. Had the perp skirted the outside of
the cemetery? Had he just sent Jo into an ambush?
Hide on the back side of the building and call Lanning, he instructed even knowing she couldn't hear
him.
To his
right. Next tree. Ten or twelve feet. There's the bastard.
No time for
stealth. Levi stepped into the open. "That's far enough."
Taken by
surprise, the man turned and fired. Levi dove and hit the damp leaves. Rolled.
The man got closer. Levi fired twice. He didn't miss.
The man
dropped to the ground covering a gravestone with his still body.
"Levi?"
*
Jo ran to
him, tree branch in hand, ready to help as much as she could. He hadn't moved
since LuLu's murderer had fallen. She hated to wish anyone dead, but this man
had shot her old babysitter without a moment's hesitation.
She could
hear sirens approaching. Heard a train whistle in the distance. And oddly, the
lights shining through the trees and rippling across the tall hotel were
beautiful blues, pinks and purples.
She dropped
the stick.
Levi blew a
long, forceful breath through his lips as he got to his feet. He limped to the
body, kneeling on his good leg to feel for a pulse. Then he shook his head,
confirming death. "Was this Rainbow
Man?"
"I don't
know, but he's the one that shot LuLu."
"What
about the other guy?"
From the
corner of her eye, something flew from behind a tall tombstone.
"Watch
out!"
A knife.
She ducked
and knocked Levi off balance, then they were both on the ground. A guttural
wrenching cry split the air, as the man leapt for his long blade.
"Get
out of here, Jo! Get help."
Easier said
than done. The crazed man
was still rolling across her legs, pinning her to the
ground. Levi had the man by his hands, stopping him from reaching the weapon.
In return, the driver straddled Levi, pinning him next to his dead partner.
Jo pulled
the phone, wasting precious seconds finding Lanning's number. "We're in a
cemetery. Levi needs help."
"We're
almost there." Lanning's voice faded as she tossed the phone behind her,
hoping they'd be found quickly.
She tripped
over a branch. It was the only weapon she could find. She swung at the man,
heard a grunt. The man pounded Levi's kidneys. The men struggled for dominance,
constantly changing positions. But if she found the gun, she could save Levi.
As bright
as she'd thought the neon lit night had been, it barely illuminated the ground.
She dropped to her knees, feeling for the cold metal of the weapon. She let her
eyes adjust to the darkness again. There it was. She got her hands around the
handle and a cold hand pried at her fingers.
"Levi!"
If you haven’t read Dangerous Memories…I hope
you’ll give it a try.
Here’s what a couple of people thought
"From the echoing shots in a cemetery straight through the
hair-raising conclusion, this story of missing memories and murders will rattle
readers from the opening pages, as they guess and guess again who the real
culprit is." ~RT Book Reviews
"I loved this book! From the very first page to the last, I could not put it down. The first few chapters were compelling, well written, pulled me straight into the plot and never let go. I loved the characters and from the beginning, I could envision them together. The author perfectly matched the two opposing forces so that from the romance angle, it was a delight to see their story unfold." ~Amazon 5 star review
"I loved this book! From the very first page to the last, I could not put it down. The first few chapters were compelling, well written, pulled me straight into the plot and never let go. I loved the characters and from the beginning, I could envision them together. The author perfectly matched the two opposing forces so that from the romance angle, it was a delight to see their story unfold." ~Amazon 5 star review
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USA Today Bestselling author ANGI MORGAN writes
Intrigues where honor and danger collide with love. Her work is a multiple
contest finalist and Publishers Weekly best-seller. She drags her dogs –and husband–
around Texas for research road trips so she can write off her camera. They now
have a map with highlighted roads they’ve traveled. Every detour somehow makes
it into a book.
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